My (New) Welcome Video

I’ve decided to start trying to incorporate more self-created video elements to my blog. I start today by producing a short “Welcome to Writing Material” video. Here it is…

I’d love any feedback you might like to offer. I’m thinking of this as part of the way I represent myself professionally, and I see this video as a draft I’ll leave up here until later in the summer when I’ll get a little more dressed up and re-produce a revision of this piece. What do you think I should include or not include as part of the text?